Haiku/Senryu / what

This gets my ten. Truly unusual. The juxtaposition of calloused highway, and butterflies work brings to mind the possible metamorphosis of humanity into something we have yet to imagine.

Frankly, I don’t understand the meaning of the poem or the message you’re trying to bring across. ‘of the calloused highway, strewn littered by earthquake’ – does it mean an earthquake just happened and the debris is all about or something? at least that’s how I read it. How do the first and second stanzas link too?

very powerful and thought provoking.

The flow of your words are very exact, incredibly captivating, a dream like quality, loved it.

Very nice piece.
I enjoy your way of words.

The first stanza makes sense. The second one, I am not sure of.

Wow, very nice, very handsome too, love the castigation.