Haiku/Senryu / Word origins

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aliciatr avatar General Friend

March 04, 2008

aliciatr

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Yes, you’re right…FUN!  I love how you wrote a 4-word haiku!  Great words you used!

Talashira avatar General Stranger

February 24, 2008

Talashira

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Very clever! A bit colder than most haikus, of course, as there’s no imagery associated with the words, but clever nonetheless.

JustGeneric avatar General Stranger

February 16, 2008

JustGeneric

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When I saw this was only 4 words long, I just had to read it.  I never thought it could be possible to write an understandable haiku, senryu, poem, or anything in 4 words, but you have succeeded.  Thanks for sharing!

ScottBJohnson avatar General Stranger

February 07, 2008

ScottBJohnson

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Whoa! This is an amazing piece! You’ve used a mere four words to achieve 575! Incredible! You get a 10!

Harold_P avatar General Stranger

January 17, 2008

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I don’t agree but this is a clever haiku

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