Thanks. I really was playing around to see how few words I could use in 17 syllables. The subject just seemed appropriate.
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Yes, you’re right…FUN! I love how you wrote a 4-word haiku! Great words you used!
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Very clever! A bit colder than most haikus, of course, as there’s no imagery associated with the words, but clever nonetheless.
When I saw this was only 4 words long, I just had to read it. I never thought it could be possible to write an understandable haiku, senryu, poem, or anything in 4 words, but you have succeeded. Thanks for sharing!
Whoa! This is an amazing piece! You’ve used a mere four words to achieve 575! Incredible! You get a 10!
I don’t agree but this is a clever haiku
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