Limericks / Meter this...

Quit preaching to me about meter.
It won’t make my poem much sweeter.
You count out, “one two THREE
And my stress aint on “THREE”…
If it’s effed up, I did it on purpose!

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Catastrophe avatar General Friend

January 17, 2008

Catastrophe

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This review is also an “anti-limerick”.
I dispensed with the meter and the AABBA scheme
(No…not the ABBA scheme.
Stop singing Dancing Queen!).
Aren’t I clever?
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.Your last line doesn’t rhyme.

evath avatar General Stranger

January 13, 2008

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ok, thank, I see you were waiting here for me…
little limerick ;-)
I’m honored that you should write a limerick
for little ole me ;-P
I’m not preaching to you about meter.
You teach meter ;-P
You teach nam-yo-ho-rengae-ku
But show me the definitive definition
of limerick…
and I’ll desist and succumb to your superior
gifts and talents…
man from nantucket is 9-9-6-6-10
and it is one of the most oft cited limerick
example! ;-P
and if you effed up on purpose for me
you ‘blew the meter’ ;-) ahahahahaaha
recalling your earlier work on the same subject.
n’est-ce pas?

jweeble avatar General Friend

January 13, 2008

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Is there an anti-limerick catagory? LOL Quite clever. :)

Brynn avatar General Stranger

January 13, 2008

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LOL well I have to laugh for the reason that I can think of, CERTAIN reviewers in here going ape shyte over this one. LOL I get drilled about meter ALL THE TIME! and commend you for doing an ANTI Limerick. I to do odd things and have received a few nasty reviews from it. BUT STAND UP TO THE BORING!!! lol I cannot really critique it as its not really real. So you got a 10 on “be understood” unfortunately a 1 on Limericks. lol

EVe

CourtshipLives avatar General Stranger

January 12, 2008

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LOL. anti-limmerick. ROFL. that’s hilarious. what is the world coming to when the euphemism has to be changed to “don’t let the Pen hold you down.” i think doing your own thing is cool, i myself don’t usually follow a strict format of structure when I write, but starting an anti-genre?! priceless…  

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