The job is one composed of dialetto and English language… You do not have no guilt :-)
Short Story / Papaleo style (Mr. Aiello)
Mr. Aiello was not many years old. I remember he. He has driven the Vespa of his brother and he has destroyed it muramura with his zita (the daughter of american woman) too.
Each of us has desired inficcarcela to the carusidda. Vincent has told that the girl was easy. It was easy sex with her how stirarici the neck to the hen.
Aiello now had done the dollars. He greets me still when he meets me.
He tells: “Totò! You are a face of minchia”. He jokes.
I this morning have seen his body out in road as an open hamburger. I have spit to it. I have returned to sleep after. The police was about to arrive and I have not wanted questions.
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axelk reviewed Version 1 -
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Sparkles reviewed Version 1 -
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Not to sound rude, but is English your second language? I have no room to make a critique simply because I cannot understand what you are getting at due to random sentence structure.
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lokijki reviewed Version 1 -
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I found it very hard to understand… That could just be my fault, but the English just seems to be poor… I don’t know if this was intentional or you just don’t speak English well, but I just find it hard to understand the story.
squarehopper reviewed Version 1 -
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This is not understandable. I tried to look up Papaleo style to see if it is the type of story writing… but I didn’t find anything.
Is this a translagion? if so it didn’t do a good job. There are words here that aren’t English and there are not enough context clues to tell us what they mean.
Also the sentence structure is very stilted and at times fails to make sense.
duddbudda reviewed Version 1 -
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This has a ‘damaged goods’ feel to it though the (i think) Italian confused me. having said that, losing this and making the grammar better would destroy the verisimilitude and personality of the piece.
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