ok, I will tell you, because you seem like such a dear soul. Flowers were given, then subsequently forgotten
However the gift remains, encased within the heart, soothing the mind etc, mending the broken soul. Love is transient thing able to be passed on through a card, a gift an expression like a kiss a touch. Write back and let me know that you understand.
Haiku/Senryu / flowers in june
forgotten flowers
encased within troubled hearts
mending broken souls
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unusualgirl0 reviewed Version 1 -
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I like it, but I don’t understand it. How do flowers mend souls?
jweeble reviewed Version 1 -
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Lovely, lonely image. Would they mend, or are they mere memories to reflect upon? Just to let you think.
NatashaTragedy reviewed Version 1 -
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A floral self rehabilitation.
Gorgeous work, might I say.
Nice imagery as well.
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