Poetry / Georgia Peaches

This is an amazing piece. I really don’t believe I can make any suggestions for improvement. (Which is amazing by itself! lol) Great job! :>)

Wow. That’s about all I can say about this. Amazing how a writer thinks, as to relate the general popularity of mankind to a tree and have it seemingly, dead on, per say. The diction employed here created vivid picturesque images as I read through, once and again. Good job and definately keep writing!

Well I loved how the piece started off and I really think that the first stanza could stand on its own.  It reads like you put the second stanza in there to explain the first but I got it and the piece has more impact, for me, if you let it linger without explanation.  The idea of having to nearly kill the tree to save it was a pretty powerful start.  The second stanza weakens the piece though.  

Strange. This doesn’t seem like a poem to me, more like journal entry or a clip from a book on spirituality. Sort of like a tarot reading, this has offered us an image to reflect on and compare to our own lives. I find this very interesting, and surprisingly complex. I’m not sure why it doesn’t seem like poetry to me, maybe because your sentences are so fluid and whole. I do wish secretly that you would keep going and tell me more about peach trees.