Haiku/Senryu / Broken Family

Yes, this is exactly the picture.
No one is ever dead in these relations
only the walking wounded. ;-(
It is a shame. Too many of our families
are this way. And God is too often absent from the places where we should keep Him, so that our hearts and the hearts of our young should not be misled to follow into yet darker relations with more painful consequences!
Thanks for your kind review.
E~

The haiku was actually about family fighting.
Warring parents whose children are the walking wounded..
Thanks for the kind review.
E~

that 1 word cost me 21 credits.
you can believe that in the future
I will be using it ;-)
“Terrifying!”
indeed!!!!

I have no idea who decides how many credits each word is worth, but there is obviously something wrong with the system that charges  over twenty credits for a one word review.

yeah. I would say.
but it is a word from you.
I make no complaints!

thanks.
no changes recommeneded, I take it ;-)

You know, in this genre it seems to me it either works or not. It provokes a response, emotion, feeling or it doesn’t.

Aside from typos, misspellings or word selection there just isn’t much you can change.

LOL; and if you change more than one word you might as well write another one because you probably just changed the sense of the whole thing. Just not a lot of maneuvering room.

谢谢
謝謝

thanks, frank!

no prob, bob!

I bow to your understanding! Thanks; I’m honored to be among favorites!!

Most wars kill the majority of the people in them.
In family wars there are only prisoners
walking wounded… the undead.
Hope this helps to clarify!
E~

cash-wal-ties,
last time I pronounced it.
;-)