Poetry / If I Don't Unfriend You - Unfriends Forever

This is actually an open letter
and inside it is a 2 stanza poem
and then more letter
and then closing with a haiku
that is probably what went wrong for you.
there should have been ”” marks around the poem
AND the haiku ;-)
seems like a jarring contrast
the letter against the rhyming poem ;-P
Oh well… I’m not perfect either.

aahhh I see. WHAT!? your not perfect!? WOW I would have never known! Lol its fine, ya know I love you=)

ya know, I’m growin’ to love you, too!!!

you, too.
thanks for review and time

Thanks for your thoughtful
review and kind words.
See you in the queue!
E~

the work is an open-letter
within which is the ‘gem’ of the poem
and more letter and then the closing
haiku.

The parts that rhyme are actually the poem part and
somehow were included with out ” ” are it to
set it apart from the letter.

thanks for reading, getting the fuzzies and
then reviewing!!!
I am so touched that you enjoyed it!
Best,
E~

Welcome!!!
and thank you for your
gracious comments!

Somehow, the version I posted turned out to be the one
that does not have the corrected punctuation marks.
This is an open-letter to my friends; contained herein,
lies the heart of the thing, “the little gem of a poem”
followed up with a haiku at the end.
Stanza 1 & 2 are the beginning of the letter.
Stanzas 3 and 4 are the poem w/in the letter.
Stanza 5 returns to the letter,
and Stanza 6 is the Haiku,
followed by the close and signature!
I can’t tell you how thrilled I am that you
finally loved a piece of mine!!!!
Who is the person who unfriended you?
It must definitely be someone who read this.
Did they actually tell you they were unfriending you due
to my post, or because they had received this letter and
an ‘unfriending’ from me?
Oh so curious, she came ;-)))

do you mind if I unfriend you
and find you again
as if finding you anew?

E~

I’m not sure if she saw this poem or someone sent her this letter but I think her name was ‘lonelyhearts’ or something like that, now that she’s gone I can’t find her again… just know her avatar! But she too wrote a lovely letter based I am sure on your letter I think a friend showed to her and she did the same thing as you, which makes perfect sense to me, and perhaps something I will do when I have time as I have 80 friends, all the best writers I assume on Urbis as I don’t get much in the queues theses days. If you are my friend then of course you may unfriend me :) and find me anew….I would be happy for that….good luck with your writing! Willow

oh yes… is her avatar the photo of a girl with a nicely
tatooed arm extended? If so, I sent her the letter
and unfriended her.
and you are not on my list and I am not on yours.
so I will be mesmerized still in the queue.
I too found that the writers I liked were no longer
reviewing me and I was no longer finding them.
That is how this Urbis unfriending frenzy started ;-)

I believe you mean lovescreature.
now you should be able to find her again.
you can search for user I think
;-)
hope this is helpful… (_). Lol…

thanks, you’re right! :)

thanks, you’re right! :)

thanks, you’re right! :)

thanks, you’re right! :)

You were correct…
this is mainly here for warming hearts ;-)
And let me say again that I loved your sensual
work… I was on that motorcycle for a moment,
or 2…
Thanks.

thank you.. it was the very first time I was on the back of a motorcycle, which in an of itself is almost over the edge sensually.. bordering dead-up sexual.. but the ride was one of those incredible New England autumn rides that are breathtaking even in a closed car.. on a bike it’s like you are floating through it..

I can well imagine it, having been on the back of a few harleys myself. nothing can quite come close except… well… let’s leave it at that!
thanks for sharing!

Toes,
thanks again for a thoughtful review.
You are generous and spirited and should
be on my list of friends… if I had one ;p
Blessings!
E~

Thanks, I sent this out yesterday to all who were “unfriended”.
Glad you liked it!
E~

Thanks… no one was offended
and one person even said they were brought
to tears!
I am a grateful writer!
;-)
E~