Haiku/Senryu / Hunger

I really like this one.  Change the comma to a period on the second line.  That will give you a seperation between your fragment and phrase.  Very evocative.  This conjures many emotions within me, some primal, some guilty.  Nicely done.

great very majestic

Love this. only critique is punctuation.
graze – no comma
body;

My stomach growls yum
She is dressed like a poem
Come and explore me

This is quite fine as it is, but can be finer.  

The title pulls us in, and I suspect most readers will NOT first think of the hunger to which you refer:  good deal!

Your main image of body as food is gently erotic and also disturbing.  

Main crit: I think you’ve got some extra syllables that can go so you can pack more meaning; I’d delete “and” and “a” for sure, and even think about “His”.  

If you go for my last suggestion and aren’t totally wedded to the idea of a he/she voyeur/object dichotomy, you could also delete “her”, and substitute “the” plus a one syl.adjective before “body.”

Of course, you’ve got the last call.  Just polish it a bit more and you’ve got a keeper.

TA