Haiku/Senryu / xmas

mall-mauled kings car haul
modern myrrh to star-struck cribs
but the baby’s gone

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December 23, 2007

Gunsaku

No. of Reviews	Overall Quality	Comment Followup
210	87.7% (57 votes)	31.6%

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49	M	Westlake Village, CA	February 06

Gunsaku reviewed Version 1 - Read 100%% of the Item

Top notch tale told here
Good haiku to end the year
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December 23, 2007

blondebeauty0107

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19	F	Theodore, AL	July 05

blondebeauty0107 reviewed Version 1 - Read 100%% of the Item

you know, this is by far my favorite thing you’ve written. i really like it alot. maybe im reading too much into it, but what i get from it is that christmas has lost its meaning… become too commercialized. too much about the money. im envious. very well done.