haha, I figured something along those lines.. and yes I am actually sick.. but now that you mention it, it could have a parallel meaning.. ha! thanks!
Poetry / Sick
Enchantment
Rapture.
Music flows like silk, softly touching my ears.
The sheets feel soft around my body…
A haven for the weary…
A cough racks.
A fever soars.
Sweat beads on my forehead.
Release.
Escaping from this wretched weakness is no easy task.
Laying in bed…I swallow my remedies..
Hoping to Escape.
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richardlynn51 reviewed Version 1 -
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Good description of being sick in bed. Get well
mequinl reviewed Version 1 -
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I like your poem.I guess you could say that it is (sick).It has good structure.
hubertskid reviewed Version 1 -
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I wonder if you are “sick” or “SICK” LOL I liked your poem. I like that it made me wonder the meaning of sick.
By the bye….in the poem “The Best Worst MAN…” when I said he gave good …..... “story”... it was to imply “head”.
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