Journal, Diary, & Blogging / Is what we want always what we get?

Wow. That’s amazingly deep! (You’re my age, so..wow!)
I’ll message my advice to you so I don’t take up uber amounts of room on this review sheet. :)

I hope you find happiness with him.

Hey there,

You have some spelling errors and grammatical ones, too. Run it thru your spell and grammer check.

Not to sound like I think your work is trite, because I don’t. It is just fascinating to me that the feelings of love are so universal and timeless, and yet feel so unique when it happens to one’s self.

Advice here isn’t going to change anything, because a symptom of being love-sick is an inability to follow reason, lol.

Find, know, and trust yourself. Once you do that, you will understand the fruitlessness of your questions. When you know exactly what YOU have to offer, you can accurately evaluate another’s worth. Until then, price yourself high, wait, and see what you catch.

God, I wish someone would have told me that a long time ago. More than that, I wish I could have been capable of listening.

Good luck,

~thysta

I pray in no way shape or form are you actually planing a commitment at your age!
Please reconsider; I don”t want you to be some emotional wreck by the time you’re 18.  How much “emotional abuse” could you have suffered at 15? Why not give yourself a break; romantic love is WAY overblown and ends soon enough.  Respect and deep affection are-hopefully-what endures.

You conveyed your feelings well.Please be careful with yourself-you only have one you…

To be fiftyeen and be in love. I remember when I first fell in love believeing that the wortld would end if this person ever left me. I was wrong because when they left because the world didn’t stop and my life continued without missing a beat.

You express your feelings very well.  You remind me of myself at your age.  I had a boyfriend from the age of 15 to 20.  What I learned was, it takes several years to get to know someone and to figure out if you like who you become after they’ve been around for a while.  It’s easy to get married and much harder to get divorced, especially if you have kids.  Wait it out.  Time is on your side.  There isn’t much difference between living together and being married unless you are religious.  My advice: Take your time.  Enjoy what you have with this person and try not to consider marriage as the next step so soon.  I’m not saying it would never work.  I’m asking what’s the hurry?

The technical stuff (I’m pretty bad about it too). Clean up the spelling such as ‘disguised’ for disgused. LOL I read it half a dozen times to make sure it was some new teenage jargon I didn’t know. “this moist lips…”. Probably ‘his’.

Ok enough of that; there are a few more but let’s look at the heart behind the work.

You have done a very good job of describing every young girls hope, doubt and wish. We guys don’t make it any easier for you either. We are in the end hunters and in love we behave much the same way. Often it is all about the chase, too often.

You have described your fear perfectly. Perhaps your memories of what “happened to ‘you’ so many times before” are the way you protect yourself from that pain happening again. But then, you muse, “Is that normal”.

You have done a very mature job of defining the dilemna of every woman who falls in love and her questions, her doubts, her fears.

Well done.

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December 19, 2007

by NeverSayGoodbye

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thank you so much =]

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I really understand what you are going through, that crazy back and forth in a relationship before you are sure of each other. I can really feel your hesitation and confusion. My only advice would be, don’t rush it. Your heart will know if you are ready, and there is no reason to rush it simply because you feel like you have to. The right one will always be there, no matter how long it takes you. The wrong one will always try to force it.

These are your personal thoughts, and I’d never critique a strangers heart. Plus its a good blog, and I can easily relate (as we all can).

But you did ask for advice so here goes! This would make an excellent poem. Try to abstract it. One thing I really like to do it run a large paragraph of words through a language server such as babelfish.com a few times and then edit the remains into a poem. Or write it out by hand, chop it up with scissors without looking and then arrange the remains to form a poem of sorts.

Keep writing. Its good for the mind.