Poetry / Rotting inside out.

You can hear my heart but is it really beating?
Maby physically but emotionally, its as dead as the rest of me.

It beats, but not for anyone, not even me.
Basically im now a dark void just existing on this earth.

Now its shatterd into a million pieces, broken beyond repair.
The last person i entrusted it to broke

So basically i have the Humpty-Dumpty syndrome
but no one tried to put me back together again

But now im feeling better, maby this persn lives me like they say they do.
...
...

No they didnt
So ive given up.

My hearts been crushed so much its now dust in the wind

Remember how in the begining it was actually beating?

well it isnt now.

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July 05, 2008

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