Poetry / there is something

This is free form prose poetry and, as such, will remain free of too much structure. The lack of punctuation and the confused grammar is important and purposeful.

Thanks for reading and commenting.

ok that I understand, and did think as much.
There is a writer, http://urbis.com/HaroHalola
who uses this form to great achievement and result. I like his usage of it when he ridicules conventional forms via imitation but transgresses the rules.
I would ask one question of you, if I am allowed a boldness of a sorts, do you or have you written to conventional forms?

I do like how you use the word, breath, and then punctuate it with a period, I noticed that it is not needed, for the word tells you what to do, and then a new paragraph, I would’ve placed two. This then is done with the next sentence, this is what I mean by punctuating the piece, without taking too many of your credits, merry xmas.,.,.,

HaroHalola looks very interesting for a number of reasons, thanks for pointing me that way.
I have and do write in conventional forms, if rarely. I just find it inappropriate for the majority of my pieces. I do tend to follow the belief that you have to know the rules before you can break them, I just really enjoy breaking them. :D

Thanks for your comments! I really do appreciate your understanding and praise.

I’m not sure if you were trying to imply that this is a “jumble of words” but I find myself unable to take offense as it is clearly not. Consider whether confusion is necessary to emphasise the madness of the ideas expressed. If you disagree, I guess we’ll just have to agree to etc.

And that is fine if you want to agree to ect.  I just felt that you can express the madness you want without having the piece jump around.