Quotes / Life

All I can say about this quote, that it is the quote of creator.. Because a creator needs some kind of pain, feeling guilty or sorry that he could create something interesting and really impressive.. The most of the greatest creations are born from the pain..

The image is clear enough.  It’s a bit melodramtic for my taste, but that’s subjective.  Objectively, I see only one major problem.  ”Drowning” does not fit with the other images.  One does not ‘drown’ in blankets, or in Hell.  All of the other images cohere but for that one.  A simple change in word choice will repair it.

Thought this was very sad, with out hope. But I am sure the feeling of many today. But it does not have to be.

You can tell from this you have an obvious talent. This only makes me more intrigued to read more from this voice or this point of view. As a quote overall, I love it. Its an honest and dark perception of a human being that a lot can relate too surprisingly.

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June 03, 2008

by 84princess

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Thank you so much.

June 03, 2008

by TiffVicious

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Real. Sounds as if this is a raw depiction of the way you view the place in your life you are at at the moment.

This is a little strong and kinda depressing, but it works and it really does describe life for some people

This was a good quote, although I think it might benefit from shorter, snappier sentences. That would give more of a feel of panic that you/the narrator seems to feel. But I suppose it made it easier to create an image. Good use of imagery and adjectives. I really did enjoy this piece/quote.

I think I can say with confidence that you are certainly speaking to the majority of the world. Least I can relate. Well, I guess that would be unfortunately I can relate.

Incredibly bleak and depressing. Word choice shows a lot of potential talent though.

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May 25, 2008

by 84princess

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Thank you!

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