cats have all gone home
are replaced by abstract shapes
black cat now lonely
Haiku/Senryu / Super Poem Identity Crisis
Lim’rick in disguise.
Trying to pass himself off
As meta-haiku…
This silly anthropomorphic prose
Was merely a wolf in black sheep’s clothes!
Under haiku concealed
was a Lim’rick revealed!
Poem’s secret identity disclosed!
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Not to sure if this is a Haiku. I did however, enjoy reading this piece. It flowed well and was lighthearted as well as endearing for this reader/writer. Love the rhyme. This piece had a persona of it’s own, good work.
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So very few folks
Will understand this short verse
And enjoy it, too
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