Haiku/Senryu / Super Poem Identity Crisis

Lim’rick in disguise.
Trying to pass himself off
As meta-haiku…

This silly anthropomorphic prose
Was merely a wolf in black sheep’s clothes!
Under haiku concealed
was a Lim’rick revealed!
Poem’s secret identity disclosed!

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lovescreature avatar General Stranger

December 28, 2007

lovescreature

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lovescreature reviewed Version 1 - Read 100%% of the Item

Not to sure if this is a Haiku. I did however, enjoy reading this piece. It flowed well and was lighthearted as well as endearing for this reader/writer.  Love the rhyme. This piece had a persona of it’s own, good work.

Gunsaku avatar General Friend

December 08, 2007

Gunsaku

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Gunsaku reviewed Version 1 - Read 100%% of the Item

So very few folks
Will understand this short verse
And enjoy it, too

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