Lyrics / Not My Work But Inspireing

Burn your countries flags
Fuck your patriotic pride
Fuck the politicians and the shit they try to hide
They make you pay their taxes and they make you fight their wars
But they won’t feed the hungry and they don’t care about the poor
Instead they try and take you for all your fucking worth
And they separate with flags all the people of the earth
They exploit our different cultures and enhance our sickening greed
And they get the hatred rising which is exactly what they need
But what about the people’s needs
Will they be unfulfilled
Ane what of those who speak out? Will those “traitors” then be killed?
The only traitors that exist are the traitors to mankind
The ones who put the money first and the people’s need behind
They say is we don’t love our country then get the hell out
Should we be thankful to die in battle for what our flag’s about?
Well fuck off
Fuck you
Fucking hear this
Your ignorant petty support doesn’t mean piss
Don’t support war, no matter what the cause
Your fucking flags and damn religion just feed corporate claws
I renounce my citizenship from the U.S.A. and I’d suggest the same for any country
Because countries kill the people’s will with patriotic lie
And every fucking day you’re killing who they say and you never even wonder why
Why do we blindly follow what our leaders have to say?
Instead let’s make them answer to the people they betray
We don’t owe our leaders anything so fuck what they demand
Then disregard their fucking lies and bury them where they stand
The flags will cover coffins where these fuckiers will now lie
And we’ll give a flag to their families when these poor bastards die
Natonalistic pride is fucking shit why can’t the people see
As long as flags fly up above us no one’s really free
Free?

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verablue avatar General Stranger

December 22, 2007

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verablue reviewed Version 1 - Read 100%% of the Item

so, by the title, you didn’t write this? why post someone else’s work for review? why not just list this person as an inspiration in your profile or something.

_Marybeth_ avatar General Friend

December 21, 2007

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_Marybeth_ reviewed Version 1 - Read 100%% of the Item

I dont see any beat in it..or how some one would sing this. Maybe it could become rap, but I liked it. I agree with these words. No one is ever really free if you have boundries such as government and flags. I greatly admire this…and I encourage you to write more of this kind of work. It is things people need to learn and understand.

MORE PEACE AND LOVE NOT WAR!

*Marybeth

cooljim102055 avatar General Friend

December 21, 2007

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cooljim102055 reviewed Version 1 - Read 100%% of the Item

hi there,

read your lyric and found it maybe a bit to long for a song, it also lacks the song structure to have it set to music and for it to be radio friendly of sourse you have to change the “f” word to something else.on the brighter side, it sees in your content, that it came from the heart and it’s what you truely believe and in parts, i do to..it’s a good start for a statement kind of song..good luck

ezmerkat avatar General Stranger

December 21, 2007

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ezmerkat reviewed Version 1 - Read 100%% of the Item

This is a powerful and emotional statement and it carries a strong message. Only thing…I think it would be even stronger without the expletives. They take away from the strength of the statement in my opinion and make the reader think it’s more from a juvenile perspective. All in all though a very powerful political statement and excellently written. The rest of the words were really well chosen and I liked it a lot.

RichardCockIII avatar General Stranger

November 23, 2007

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RichardCockIII reviewed Version 1 - Read 100%% of the Item

this is anti-art.  angry, lyrical, fucking furious… sure it’s expressive and primitive, but that is part of its charm.

most would not have the balls the post this.  

    

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