Poetry / Out Of Control

My heart is tired,

My head is pounding.

My life spinning out of control.

I smile a fake smile,

trying to convice people things are okay.

My eyes give me away,

They never let me get away with much.

My lips tremble,

As I try to say I’m okay.

The unwanted tears come suddenly,

pouring down my face.

Friends and family try to hug me,

try to say it will be okay,

but I don’t want to be touched,

their touch burns holes in my skin,

and sends shivers down my spine.

I don’t want to hear their words.

I want don’t want to be alone,

I want to be held.

I don’t want to be touched,

I want to be alone.

My emotions run through me,

Making my heart tired,

My head pound,

And my life spins out of control.

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