Poetry / Manson's Mansion
The Devil in the detail,
Not in Prison Industry’s retail.
Millions and Millions constructions spent,
Billions and Billions obstructions rent.
Lawyers and Judges,
Foyers behind the scene begrudges,
Industrialists and psychologists,
In gold dust, do we not list?
And Tycho did not look in sky with fists.
The cast of the play,
If I may?
So sitteth unpretty Manson,
King of malformed man’s minds and son’s sadism slip,
Swastika on forehead,
Caustic costs hah!
And scores not read!
While all American Girls,
Can’t tell what countries Artic swirls.
File USA children in toilet hurls,
And money piles as of wind in Fat Cat furls,
Chaucer smiles that your Criminals are Pearls!
Manson’s sick prophet’s profiteer profit whirls!
We should flail this trail of ugly snail with a salted nail,
Ale that makes us pale,
Fail in our mail,
Wail of black, brown, white, red and yellow mellow, children’s education not sail!
Bustin’ Rocks,
Not caps while on their Gangsta head a Lawyer’s sock stocking stock?
Busta Move,
And please approve,
Don’t for the sake of our children, reprove,
Put on a smock and ask, removed,
“Where did France and Europa send Waterloo’s Napoleon?”
Too a salted Papillion’s island that sick, sick birds flock to bust rocks and die malted,
And we, not hearts halted, should be of exalted docketed docked mocks!
It’s what Spock would do!
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This is a very entertaining read, it’s like a mixture of Tool and System of a Down, with a hint of Bright Eyes at the start. Then it whirls into a complete jumble of interesting questions lacking many articles. You did misspell Arctic though. Other than that it was very compelling, but it seemed like it didn’t need the ‘sitteth’ kind of annunciation considering the rest of the poem did not contain it.
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I hate being a hypocrite but you really seemed to sacrafice the integrity of the poem with your devotion to rhyme. I’ll admit i you were clever with the way you seemed to pull some of them out of your butt. The bottom line is though it has potential, and I would love to see it after some revision.
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