Children's / BB And Sissy Go Visit GG
BB is in his booster and Sissy is in her car seat.
They are going for a ride today to give their GG a treat.
GG lives very far away in a special place.
She doesn’t get to see them much, or their Nana Grace.
A nursing home is what they call the place where GG stays.
The nurses ther take care of her and give her busy days.
When BB sees his GG he goes and gives her a hug and a kiss.
She hugs him back then says to Sissy, “Come give me some to my little miss.”
When Sissy gives Gg a kiss and a hug GG calls her Maggie May.
Sissy tells GG “Thats not my name.” Nana says, “Its okay.”
“GG can’t remember alot of things. She thinks I’m her sister Mary.
She thinks that you are Aunt Margie today and that BB is your Uncle Larry.”
Nurse Floanne tells them that GG’s illness makes her memory bad.
But shes very happy to see them today, so theres no reason to feel sad.
On the way home BB asks Nana, “Can we go see GG again?”
Nana looks in the mirror and smiles at him and says “Of course we can.”
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‘GG lives very far away in a special place.’ Maybe add in a “very” special place
needs an extra word somewhere to even out with next sentence.
She hugs him back then says to Sissy, “Come give me some to my little miss.” Are your quotation marks in the wrong place here?
Sad story, but at least children are so open and forgiving for things. Sweet story.
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This is the first story..well kids story that deals with alzheimers…..I think that;s the spelling. With so many kids story about sharing, using manners, or etc. It’s good to read something about a different subject.
Wow, suddenly the BB and Sissy stories turn up each time I search for something of children’s literature to review. Seeing as I have already been at it twice, I thought I’d leave out a remark this time, though, after having read it, I feel very much like complimenting you. This is most definitely the one of the three (I have read and now reviewed) I like the best. I think it is due to GG. She is cool and the rhyme about her thinking they are Aunt Margie and Uncle Larry was hysterical! (: If I had to say something about this text, I’d most likely encourage you to put in a bit more of GG mistaking the world around her and the children not understanding. Those things are always funny and funny, old ladies are too (: Nice job.
I think the content is a little sadistic for a children’s novel. It almost seems as if this was a comical look on the situation. also, im not sure little kids would understand what a GG is. I didn’t until I read the note. Your rhyming is good and makes the story more kid friendly
Well I like how Nana explain her sickness to the kids. Instead of letting think she’s crazy. Your forgot to capitalize a g in this sentence:
When Sissy gives Gg a kiss and
I didnt really learn like a lesson or morale from this story, but thought you did okay with it.
6th line…typo of the word “there”
“When Sissy gives Gg a kiss”....capitalize “GG”
“Nana says, “Its okay.”’.....It’s
“can’t remember alot”....a lot
“shes very happy to see them”....she’s
“theres no reason to feel sad.”.....there’s
and says “Of course we can…..and says, (comma) “Of course we can.”
Fun, nicely written poem…just the spelling and punctuation
It has a wonderful cadance to the words, and a nice message for children.
This in my opyion might be a little hard for younger children to understand.
“She doesn’t get to see them much, or their Nana Grace”
i was kindof confused as to who nana grace was. Maybe you could make this more clear. All and All its very cute and sounds like something a child might be able to read. Good Job!
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