Short Story / Sunset Island
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[tHIS IS only part OF THE STORY. yOU will not GET EVERY BIT OF THE INFO. this is just TO SEE WHAT YOU THIN,KK OF MY INTRO!!!!!!! i’M SORRY I HAD TO PUT THAT BUT i JUST WANTED TO LET YOU KNOW!]
The bright orange raft bobed up and down with the steady rythem of the waves. Crying sea gulls swoped down to snatch struggling breakfast into a waterless and terrifying flight. The sun hung low in the violet sky, spreading golden rays of light into the dark sea.
Hannah Trel’s pale hand droped over the side of the raft as she stured. The rush of cold water woke her. Hannah’s pulse quickend as she lifted her head from a sticky, red puddle that collected under her as the blood driped from a cut on her forhead.
It took her a moment to realize she wasn’t in her room, but out in the middle of the ocean. Panidingm she scanned the water for The Holiday Crouse ship, wich had been her home for the past three weeks. She and her mother were on thier way to Africa to see her grandparents, who had moved from Texas when she was five years old.
Her mother and her grandmother never got along, so Hannah guessed that was the reason. But what she couldn’t understand was why ten years later her grandparents wanted them to come.
[I promise I’ll post more tomarrow!!!!]
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totaly love though nothing is perfect can’t wait to read the rest. and just on my mind i think i have an new story i am going to write. give ur review when it decide to post it
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