Haiku/Senryu / Evil Empire

I am glad you found it funny. Thank you for your review.

You are welcome.

I missed the pun in the second line … ouch bill=Bill!  Then my review is full of stupidity.  I am sorry… I guess it is too early in the morning for me.  But I still don’t get the third line.

After you read it again you caught that ill was also Bill Gates. I might of got the name wrong With software packs. Is that what they call when you buy Windows xp software packs. I don’t know now. Thanks for your review and the remark you left on filbet review.

Thank you.

hi-coup gets me smiling.

Evil Empire came from an article I read. I have not been able to locate it sense. Or I would give them credit for the title.  Thanks for the review.  

Thank you

It made her slime?  That’s unusual.  ;-)

Have no idea

sorry that was smile: small, common, typo.

I was going for Bill being high and the bill is high (price). Thank you for your review.

No kidding…what does he do with it all? LOL! Stare at it…Anyway, np.

Thanks

I agree, he was smoking something to think he could charge a high price for his buggy software. Thank you I am glad someone else feels the same way.

I was not trying to impress you. If you don’t understand a haiku that’s all you need to say and a short reason way. Thank you.

why would i care about whether you tried to impress me, and what does that have to do with the validation of hyphen usage?

You wrote “I’m not very impressed”

...yes, well done, and I repeat “why would I care about whether you tried to impress me?”.

For example, I might say to someone “I’m cold”, and they might respond “Why would I care if you’re cold?”. Then I might say, “I don’t care whether you care that I’m cold”. But presumably you would respond “But you said you were cold”.

Presumably you wouldn’t care if I said you can’t take the most watered down criticism either, so I don’t expect any more return comments that might, once more, contradict your alleged lack of care.

Another point of note: writers sometimes like to know whether the reader is impressed by what they write.

To be honesty, I can’t remember why I had responded in the way I did. I should not of of said, “I was not trying to impress you”   How I should of responded – The use of bill instead of Bill works because it is easier to visualize the “bill” as both a person and a position. If you use “Bill” first all you see is a person.
The use of “hi-coup” Was to emphasise the feeling of getting hi then the score of the coup. I thank you for writing back to set me straight. I hope this was a better response. Please let me know where I have made mistakes. That is he way I learn. It is appreciated.

I thought it was funny myself. Thank you for reviewing.