Poetry / Mutating Shoe Bunny (Revision)

Over
Under
Loop
Around and
Through

Wait… slow down!
Which is the bunny?
He goes under the shrub?
I couldn’t see.
What shrub?

I don’t see a bunny.
I don’t see a shrub.
The bunny is the shrub?
I don’t get it.
Show me again?

© EAO September 2006

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