Poetry / Nothing Is Like

Nothing is like
The feeling of
The breeze

Nothing is like
The power
Of imagination

Nothing is like
Green grass
And blue skies

Nothing is like
laughing at
A joke that is funny

Nothing is like
Smiling when
You want to

Nothing is like
Feeling the
Summer’s warmth

And nothing is like
Have your
Beater as one.

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jweeble avatar General Stranger

December 03, 2007

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Very nice images. I would like more explanation than that given in reviewing instructions, maybe from the poem? Also – nothing is like becomes a bit monotonous by the end. Maybe group some of the statements together under one – and use it less often?  By the end, the final statement doesn’t have the impact that I would love to see it have, because you are almost numbed by the repetition.

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