Poetry / Much Better

Tonite I saw all I want to see
Terrible
Ugly
Scary things
Went a bit too close to the edge this time

But now I feel much better

Words flew all about my head
Though very few penetrated my skull
Lights shown brighter than the sun
My dry mouth couldn’t speak

But now I feel much better

One too many
Right in a row

Looking down at my dinner on the floor
Snorting it down and holding it back
Hurting
So good
and not wanting it to stop

But now I feel much better

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Age: 29
Loc: Clinton, NC
Gen: F
Last Login: June 26
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