Journal, Diary, & Blogging / My Dear Friend
I found myself thinking today on what life without you might be like, and i can say that i couldn’t see it at all.I know this might sound a tad absurd but when i look into my future even if it is just a little way off i have to say i see you in it. Even if you are just a friend. Even though in my mind there is the potential to be so much more. sigh I should stop thinking ahead like that because it makes me realize how close i am to being alone. I hate the thought, but i hate even more the thought of having my friends there with me but still being detached. That last part scares me pretty bad. I am not sure exactly how to describe what i am feeling all i know is that when i think of hte future, you’re in it even if it is just the supporting role. I have to thank you for that even though it is shafting you out of everything you deserve. I can’t say i would hold you back, but i kind of wish i could to be selfish and say i have this great friend and i am not going to let them go. Even though i know i will have to eventually because every great thing in my life goes away. I will just revel in the moments of fun we had together.
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Well, I must say….very deep. I like it. But I must ask, who si this friend you speak of? So fond you are of them, and so worried that they’d leave you behind. It depresses me, I like it. Keep up the amazing work!
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How can you be so fucking deep? grin
I loved this line:
because it makes me realize how close i am to being alone.
The phrasing; I really like the phrasing.
This is a lovely piece. I can see you are thinking of someone and I can see this is real for you. And I can see….
you will have fun with this writing thing, won’t you?
Please work on more subjects of this nature, (as it suits your mood, I mean) as you really have a voice.
You know?
grin
Oh and fix those typos, grin
Thanks, you Lizard. grin
Heather
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