Thanks for sharing that comment, and I’m glad you liked it. I’d love to be a great lyracist, but have to rely on people like your for the critiquing so I know if I’m headed in the right direction with it. Diane
Lyrics / Polishin' Buckles With You
I was a cowboy’s darling and
Queen of the rodeo
I’d wear my crown in every town
Turning. Burning. Try’n’ to make short-go.
But on Friday nights when they dimmed the lights
We would dance the whole night through
It’s so fun to be the one polishin’ buckles with you
Chorus: We’d Docey-Doe and Stonewall
We’d Texas Two-Step to “You and Me.”
Some Slappin’ Leather and Cha Cha would warm us up for the Tumbleweed
We’d Swing and we would Hustle; and then we’d dance the Longhorn Special
Dance, cowboy. Dance a few.
It’s so fun to be the one polishin’ buckles with you
I was a cowboy’s sweetheart with
two daughters and a son
Workin’ full time. Singin’ nursery rhymes.
Giving. Living. ‘Till the week was done.
But on Friday nights when they dimmed the lights
We would dance the whole night through
It’s so fun to be the one polishin’ buckles with you
Chorus: We’d Docey-Doe and Stonewall
We’d Texas Two-Step to “You and Me.”
Some Slappin’ Leather and Cha Cha would warm us up for the Tumbleweed
We’d Swing and we would Hustle; and then we’d dance the Longhorn Special
Dance, cowboy. Dance a few.
It’s so fun to be the one polishin’ buckles with you
Now I dance the one-step to a lonesome tune
underneath the stars
but when I make Heaven’s gate
We’ll Hip Hop and we’ll Figure 8
Dancin’ to the strum of guitars
Chorus: We’dl Docey-Doe and Stonewall
We’d Texas Two-Step to “You and Me.”
Some Slappin’ Leather and Cha Cha would warm us up for the Tumbleweed
We’d Swing and we would Hustle; and then we’d dance the Longhorn Special
Dance, cowboy. Dance a few.
It’ll be fun to be the one polishin’ buckles with you
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hi there,
very good, i luv the song patternv/c/v/c/ and the ryhming pattern, very good as the meter was right on too in the verses, just the way it suppose to be..this is the best crafted song i have read to date,really, most people don’t use the craft of songwriting in their creative writing,ideas etc.believe it or not/the only thing i would change is the title/i understand what you mean..:) and the play with words in a orginal way..but still/for me that is/polishing buckles don’t do it for me..maybe..”i still like rodeo riding with you”..i’ve used to many credits already..sorry/jim
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LittleWhale reviewed Version 2 -
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If I had to rate this piece from 1 to 10, I would have to give it 10. It is concise. There is a begining, middle and end. It has a great chorus. And most of all it is the frateral twin of one of my favorite songs, “I Want To Be A Cowboy’s Sweetheart.” My favorite line is, “Some Slappin’ leather and Cha Cha would warm us up for the tumbleweed.” An old fashion pure joy.
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Normally when I read lyrics here on Urbis, I have a hard time hearing what sort of song it has become. But this was wonderful, it is not a poem and not to be confused with one. It was hard for me not to start dancing with my laptop.
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This is quiet an amazing song. I loved this piece and I feel that it is verily well written and original. I say keep up the great work, I will look forward to reading more from you in the future.
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