Poetry / Emotions Run Rampid
Emotions run rampid,
Under that smile of hers.
They think she’s being overdramatic,
Absolutely absurd.
They’ve compared her to an actress,
Trying to be a star.
Even thought the truth is out,
And still, from it, they’re so far.
Although they can’t see it,
Her emotional scars grow.
She can’t take it anymore,
Please. Don’t leave her alone!
She’s lost in a sea of confusion,
She thinks every one she once loved is gone.
Will you be a friend to her?
And help her move along?
Or will you turn your back on her,
Denying her all but remorse?
Because if you can not face her
You’re allowing her tread on a dangerous course.
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An intense read that shows much forethought in the emotion. But the meter seems lost about half-way through. I appreciate the intention and depth of the meaning behind this poem, but the meter change does throw this off a bit. A profound read tho.
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