Lyrics / B-More Careful
Remember Lil’buddy used to be the coolest kid on the street but he thought he was hard cos now he’s flauntin’ the heat ain’t nothing wrong witcha hustle unless ya hustle get’cha in trouble now it’s all in his head he think he’s the hood’s muscle now homie got work down 95 ask me to come wit’em and I’m like I’m finebut I’mma pray 4 U buddy just to make sure U safe it’s been a couple of days and I ain’t heard from’em so I called my dude just to see what’s up he said he ain’t nowhere to be found so we called everybody around town so I could know what’s going on a sharp pain in my heart told me he wasn’t okay so I was scared to break the news to momma that her Lil’Boy wasn’t coming home no more
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i found this piece a bit hard to read due to the run on sentences. maybe what you should do is break up the sentences a bit. i am not sure if this is the verse or the chorus. but what you should do is everytime you take a break in the rap, go on to the next for the following line then it will be easier to read.
these lyrics send a good message letting people know that crime/drug don’t pay.
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