Poetry / Silence (Analysis)

Standing in the middle of a field
Circled by trees
I am surrounded by
A deafening silence.

I hold my hands up to my ears
In order to block the sound
But I fail,
The painful silence continues.

Standing in the middle of a city street
Circled by people
I am surrounded by
A deafening silence.

I hold my heads up to my ears
In order to block the sound
but I fail,
And the merciless silence continues.

The only thing that can break this silence
Is your voice.
It is as though my mind
My heart
Doesn’t allow me to hear anything but your voice.

So I wait
In a field
Or in a city
Until the next time I hear your voice
To help break the silence.

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