Poetry / Sacrifice

Sacrifice

Let me explain to some of y’all twink’s what sacrifice is…
We all love, we all lose.
No one is higher than another, all pains- are just that.
Pain…
It should make us grow and mature…
But when we measure how much more we have endured and suffered,
That what we have endured and suffered is more than the next man, woman, child, or even inanimate objects.
We have lost.
Sacrificed in Vain…
Lost the purpose of pain, of sacrifice.
Lost the steps of the process, the cycle.
The cycle that makes this world revolve/ evolve.

I’m not done yet sacrificing myself for my loved one’s.
Even if I have to sell my ass out on the street…

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March 19, 2007

OweFiresRight

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December 31, 2006

Daniel_rain

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Daniel_rain reviewed Version 1 - Read 100%% of the Item

I really enjoyed this piece Teddy. It says much about life (in my opinion)

Really well-written and effective.

I look forward to reading more of your work.

Have a great ‘07,

Dan

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December 31, 2006

by teddybear818

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Thank you very much, I have been letting too much of what everyone else has to say get to me lately. I hope to return back to myself in ‘07.

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