Poetry / Melaney

I handed you my heart…......
        ......You returned it with pain

I gave you my love…......
      .........I thought I had yours

I was faithful…......
     .......You were not

I once loved you…....
    ..........with all I had

To think of it again…...
     .........it hurts too bad

My heart once properly functioned…..
      ........Now feeling so    
My heart bound by barbwire…...
   ......it tightens everytime I say your name

I only regret one thing and thats…...
       .......I gave you my heart

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November 17, 2006

vellina

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vellina reviewed Version 1 - Read 100%% of the Item

i like this and i can feel the tears in it. i think the .d.o.t.s. give it feeling.

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