Poetry / I Love Babies!

oh look brokenhand, maplestreet has “constructive” criticism… afterall, if it’s not constructive it must be distructive. And how is anyone going to listen to that? Your points are valid but delivered carelessly and ineffectively… and now look at us, we are critiquing the critics… piece…

I think the word you were going for was destructive.  Sorry to crit your comment.  I wasn’t trying to be mean, I was just trying to help.  Perhaps I shouldn’t have included the word bitch, now that I look back at it, that was a mistake – but I never meant for her to think that I was calling her one, which I feel is rather obvious apon a first reading of my critique.  Nevertheless – the feeling I am getting from everyone is that this is a site where we all praise each other and puff each other up by telling each other how great one another’s poems are.  Well, sorry… but I am NOT that kind of person and I dont want people to do that to me.  I guess I should just keep in mind that there are people on this site that cant handle someone being harsh with their poem.  I guess I will have to find a gentle way to say “this poem bites ass”...  SO BE IT.  

What a shitty childhood you must have had. The fact that you read the writing of a total stranger and, without knowing anything about this person, chose to use a word like bitch shows that you have no consideration for the feelings of others. Others who you see to be less than you in some way. I’m sure you wouldn’t dare to criticize someone you consideder better than you, so you chose to show your “power” over others by berating and belittling them in order to make yourself feel good. I don’t care how well-read and educated you are and I really don’t care if you know the “rules” of poetry and self-expression like the back of your hand, if you don’t use your “gifts” responsibly and to the benifit of others, than you are nothing more than a run-of-the-mill, garden-variety BULLY! Thanks for your review!! 3-  :)

Is that little hieroglyph at the end of your comment supposed to be a dick and balls shooting cum into your smiley face?  Oh sorry, was that too graphic for you?  Did you even read my crit, or any of my comments?  I didn’t call you a bitch. For the last time, I was trying to tell you how to avoid being called a bitch (now wasn’t that considerate of me).  Gosh… your sucha freekin iddddiot.  And anyways, because I used the word bitch does not mean that I dont care about other people, that is an ignorant statement if I’ve ever heard one, and it would also mean that you and I would be in the same category.  Go take a look back at the names that youve actually called me – Asshole, Dick, etc.  So who’s the bully?  Is it me?  Let’s see, I gave you crit, you said “blah blah blah metaphors, blah blah blah, DICK”.  I didn’t berate you to make myself feel good, I have weed for that.  I berated you because you needed to be because your poem sucked donkey balls.  JUst so you know I aint well educated, I just know a good poem when I see one, and I was just trying to make yours better thats all.  Just cuz I can make up my own metaphors doesnt mean I am some snobby intellectual that wants to spoil everyone here with the rules of poetry.  Sorry, I know its hard for you – I mean you couldn’t even avoid using cliches in your diss.  I would suggest mass produced ass (that has a ring to it)!
peace out sister.

weed, huh? i get it now. so sorry. how silly of me to be so touchy. let us be best friends always, please????

you are a wierd woman neener, I cant quite get you.
(thats a compliment)

I’m not to be gotten.

as you can see, I didn’t call you a stupid bitch, so you can stop being so sad about it all.  I was just giving you some crit, I didn’t know that simply including the word bitch in my review would immediatly cause you to assume that I was calling you one.  

thanks jnim!! finally someone with a kind heart and TACT!!!! muah!

there is no listner because she is not adressing anyone but us.  Pretty self explanitory actually.  And I did give crit, the suggestion is stop using tired cliches and get your own ideas.  What, do you want me to give her my ideas so she can just rip more people off?  At least I gave some crit, not just a “well done neener” when anyone with any aesthetic can tell that this poem sucks.

well, my dear Mr. my-shit-don’t-stink, if it hurts you so much that you have to be mean about it, you can just avoid reading my stuff. i was trying something new. I don’t spend every minute of my life working on this stuff. I do actually  have a life. i didn’t think that people like you would make it their life’s work to treat other people like shit. my bad. oops, was that a cliche? I will have to work on that.