Poetry / You, Me, and Us

You make me feel like I can soar
Threw the sky
Even swim on the ocean floor

You make me feel like I can cry
When ever I want to
Even you make me un-shy

You make me feel like I can say
Anything I want
Without us having a fray!

You make me feel so great
Like I am everything
Even if I may be late

I will always remember you
No matter what comes and goes
And always remember me too

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March 06, 2007

Rol

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No. of Reviews	Overall Quality	Comment Followup
129	81.8% (44 votes)	57.4%

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49	F	Tacoma, WA	February 04

Rol reviewed Version 1 - Read 100%% of the Item

Great tribute to a friend.  I like the rhyme scheme, and the 3 line verses.  Just want to correct the spelling of one word – through the sky.  Great job!

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March 06, 2007

by _Marybeth_

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103	66.7% (9 votes)	61.9%

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102	F	United States	October 16

Yes, I make many spelling mistakes, I am young, but that shouldn’t be an excuse, I just mess up sometimes.

March 08, 2007

by Rol

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No. of Reviews	Overall Quality	Comment Followup
129	81.8% (44 votes)	57.4%

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49	F	Tacoma, WA	February 04

Nobody can spell.  Don’t worry about it.  It was the only criticism I had.  I really liked your work!

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