Poetry / Reaching Out

You make me crazy
But I love you anyway

I hardly see you
Yet you stay on my mind

You leave me confused
But I haven’t given up

I just hope you know that I care
Even all the times when you’re not there

With heart and soul
I still hold on
But I’m not psychic
So tell me if I’m wrong

You need your space
As much as I need mine
And all wounds heal
If given enough time

I like you
I love you
I think you’re a blast

I just hope that we can find each other

Before our time has passed.

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January 13, 2008

Willow_Wren

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December 28, 2007

allycat135

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allycat135 reviewed Version 1 - Read 100%% of the Item

I think the you needs to be developed with imagery and characteristics to really solidify this as a working poem.  I as the reader cant relate at all because I know nothing about the you except the blanket qualities you assign to him/her i.e.: is a blast, but confuses and rejects.  I can’t possibly feel anything about this situation and these people unless you divulge more.

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