Poetry / Love Poetizer

Dare

I to expect

That mankind can

Understand love

Like a poet can?

I shudder

I shudder to wonder how lovers love without understanding

I shudder to wonder how hearts with red trimming

Ihat carry the soulful emotions of a lifetime

Can be shattered by the footsteps of ignorance

I believe not in infertility

There is no such thing as an infertile woman

There is only ignorance in the mind that breeds in the womb

Ignorance in the soul that translates through the limbs

I promised not to poetize again

But once a poet

Always a poetizer

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September 22, 2006

mikeyrook5

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September 19, 2006

Rac

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Rac reviewed Version 1 - Read 100%% of the Item

Nice poem you’ve got here. Creates a concept of understanding for the reader, and makes them analyze not only the poem, but their own actions and lifestyle.

I often focus on the way a writer wraps up a piece, and your last three lines seem to do the trick very nicely.

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