Short Story / The Life

I opened my eyes to a gray wall, a broken window, some clothes, and a torn blanket. I take a deep breath and realize, “This is my life.” I walk to my kitchen in the next room, and scrape what i can out of the jar of food i ate last night. My bare feet drag accross the worn linolium floor. By now i have gotten use to the smell of rancid garbage and the scurrying of rats and other unwelcomed animals. I throw away the old, cold, dry pizza on my table. and i sit in my chair.

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August 12, 2007

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August 25, 2006

ethankegley

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August 25, 2006

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August 25, 2006

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August 25, 2006

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August 25, 2006

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August 25, 2006

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August 24, 2006

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August 24, 2006

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August 24, 2006

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Yeah, really short.  But very descriptive.  Sounds like a sad life.

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