Poetry / Dull

Diamonds fell, instead of rain
It seemed so dull
Against your face

Perfume is sweet, I do not care
Lost in your flowing
Chocolate hair

Earth pulled hard, I floated there
So blissfully light
Heavy air

O, your eyes burned white and left me blind
I enjoyed feeling
Your hand in mine

Thieves kiss thieves and keep their prize
Your lips magically
Stole my mind

I blindly float, its simply true
Don’t care at all
I wanted you

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June 25, 2009

Willow_Wren

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June 25, 2009

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