Short Story / Angel Succombing
Flaxen blonde hair crept it way down a tanned, slim back framed by two outwardly folding wings of the purest white. A gauzy material that hid virtually nothing from anyone hung limply accentuating the curves of graceful hips and full, ripe breasts. The hardened nipples of dark brown easily being seen as they pressed against the flimsy material in a way that would harden any man mortal or not.
She crept down the beach on silent feet that left no impression in the sand, but she needn’t have been trying to be quiet for the beach was deserted. She found a lovely spot to sit and watch the sunset with her back propped against a rock and her feet dug into the sand. All was good with the world.
Not that she was really supposed to be on Earth. She had merely slipped away for some quiet time to enjoy one of her favorite pleasures—watching the sun set on a sandy beach in complete solitude. The red rays of the sun flaring out from the bright orange in the sky, mingling cohesively with the tropical blue of the sky and water seemed to sooth her already perfect soul.
And now, she thought with an impish grin on her face, for my other great pleasure. She reached a hand down and lifted the gauzy skirt higher so that he long, delicate fingers could trace a line up the inside of her own thigh. Her fingernails were neither too long, nor too short, they were the perfect length to press onto her already hardened clit and pinch slightly to give herself an arousal.
Now if a mortal had come along and seen a beautiful angel like her in this position of repose it may have changed everything they knew about religion. Most of the churches thoughts have angels as being non-sexual creatures, but as this angel knew sexual release through orgasm was one of the greatest gifts that god had given mortals and angels alike. As HE had said many times while his tongue was going in and out of her “If I hadn’t intended it to be fun, I wouldn’t have made it so enjoyable.”
Once a mortal died and made their way to heaven they were usually startled by the fact that they could have sex, not only whenever they wanted, but usually with whomever they wanted, and as often as they wanted. It usually took them a couple of days to get used to it, but even the most hardened southern baptist preacher soon came to understand that the mortals on earth, and especially the Catholic religion, have had their views on sex screwed up for centuries. And “came” they did—over and over.
But as she lay there playing with her own moistness and enjoying herself she thought that once in a while, self-gratification was just as good as having Gabriel’s horn inside of you—sometimes even better since Gabriel never really cared if you came or not, he was so into himself most of the time.
Her other hand rose up to cup her breast with it’s permanently hardened nipples, and trace the outline gently, her head laying back against the rock as her body started to respond to her own fingers.
“Looks delectable!” The voice startled her out of her almost having an orgasm. “May I have a taste?” The question followed by a dulcet giggle of laughter.
Her head came up quickly to see in front of her a vision that was almost as beautiful as herself, but in a darker version. Short-cropped midnight black hair framed a face with high cheekbones and a dusky, dark skin found on many island women except the eyes were as bright and blue as a Viking warrior. A shapely body with long legs and high, perky breasts covered by a tight-fitting 2-piece bathing suit that did nothing to hide the fine attributes. But what was most startling was when she licked her lips, the end of her tongue was slightly forked.
“You’re a succubi!” Said as a statement, rather than a question.
“Yes, I am. But even succubi like to have sex.” She giggled again and tilted her head to look all innocent in contrast with her words. “What’s the harm? It looks like you are about to have some fun, and I know I could go for some. Besides, I have never had an angel before.”
The angel thought for a few moments, but with her fingers still inside her wet, throbbing pussy it didn’t take long to come to a decision, so she spread her legs a little more, arched her eyebrow and smiled at the succubi. What she really wanted to know was how that forked tongue would feel as it licked her inside and out.
The succubi slowly and seductive, as is there nature, shed her skimpy little bathing suit and dropped to her knees in the sand next to the angel. Bringing her face close, she placed her beautifully abundant lips upon the angels while she let her hands dropped to both breasts. Their hot breath mingled as their tongues touched for the first time. The strange feel of the succubi forked tongue aroused the angel in a way she hadn’t been aroused in a long time. There was a fire all across her body as she longed to feel that tongue on her clit.
The succubi slowly let her leg drift over the top of the angels so that she was straddling her as she wrapped both hands in the golden locks and tugged, gently but firmly forcing the angels face down into her breasts. The angel responded with a little whimper of pain, but wasn’t about to let that stop her from having pleasure at the same time. In return the angel reached behind the succubi and grabbed two handfuls of ass and dug her fingers in, pulling her closer so that both of there crotches were touching. The angel almost exploded with an orgasm right there, but the succubi shifted at the last moment to stop it from happening.
“Ah, now, now. Not yet, we are just getting started.” Her laughter more harsh than the previous giggles.
The succubi took the angels hand with its long fingers and guided in between the succubi’s legs and forced the fingers to go inside her, first one, then two, then three fingers were quickly stroking the inside of the succubi’s very wet pussy. As she rode the angels fingers her face took on an expression of extreme lust, her mouth opened in a huge “O” that at first had no sound to it, but suddenly built to a crescendo of noise that must have been heard from miles away even over the crash of the waves.
A giant smile crossed the succubi’s face as she slowly lowered herself, sliding down the body of the angel, stopping for only moments to enjoy the perfect breasts and pinch the hardened nipples roughly. Her forked tongue slid across the hardened muscles of the angels belly and continued down, down, down to her hairless glistening mound.
Two fingers started a circling pattern across the opening of the vagina while she used her forked tongue to stroke both sides of the clit. It seemed as if both tendrils of the fork had separate minds of their own and could move independent of each other. One could stroke the clit, while the other could move in circles around it. The angel had never felt something like this before and found that she was so turned on she was starting to make noises as loud as the succubi had. Her moans of pleasure must have been heard in the heavens above. Just as she thought she was going to cum though, the succubi stopped playing with her clit and slid her tongue deep inside of the angels wet pussy. And while the tongue played havoc with the senses of the angel a single finger was slipped unobtrusively inside of the angel’s ass.
The rhythm of the tongue in the pussy and the finger in the ass started to go faster and harder. The angel could have sworn the tongue was as large as Michael’s cock now (reputed to be the largest cock in Heaven) and the single finger in the ass was joined by another. Pretty soon the succubi had both elbows in the sand and had fingers from both hands inside of the angels tight little, unused ass fucking her harder than she had ever been fucked before.
Luckily no mortal was within miles or he may have been driven deaf by the the screams of pleasure coming from the angel.
But for some reason the angel couldn’t seem to reach full orgasm, no matter how hard, and how fast the succubi stroked her clit, tongue fucked her or raped her asshole. She just couldn’t seem to cum, and she was starting to get extremely frustrated.
Finally she threw her head back abandoning all civility as she moaned and ground her hips into the succubi’s tongue and fingers. But suddenly she caught sight of a feather floating next to her cheek which once again stopped her from being able to cum because it distracted her. She reached to move the feather away only to see it joined by another, then another. She turned her head completely to the side to see that there were angel feathers all over the sandy beach next to her.
The succubi stood up and a deep, malicious laugh escaped her full red lips. She stood there with her hands on her shapely hips and looked down at the angel who was sitting there in horror looking at what used to be her wings.
“Silly little angel, don’t you know that if you have sex with a devil from the netherworld that you lose all rights and attachments to Heaven? I didn’t think so.” The succubi’s laughter gained in momentum and turned baritone in sound. The once sexy body was slowly changing, gaining a red hue, a tail extruding from the rear portion and horns growing from the scalp where moments before hair had been.
“Now you belong to me, you little bitch!” In front of the fallen angel now stood the lord of the underworld himself. “And another thing you might like to learn is that while you may have enjoyed sex up in heaven with HIM fucking you whenever HE wanted, but down here things are different. You shall never again be able to achieve orgasm as a fallen angel.”
The horrified look on the fallen angel’s face was enough to cause the dark lord to rock the beach with his laughter that went on, and on, and on.
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I like this. However, Mormons will hate it. And I like that too. My only beef is that you go to great lenghts to show sex as ok; ok in heaven, ok with Gabriel, etc… But then the plot twist at the end has this poor, hot sultry angel losing her right to fuck like a rabbit in heaven for all eternity. That I didn’t like. And I would like to have seen a strapon, or at least a strapon shout out.
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Definately well written, but the end seemed kinda like a cop out. I must admit, it is a little weird to read a story like this with all the angel and god stuff thrown in, but somehow you were keeping it moderately…not innocent…but not straight up raunchy. A little bit, but not horribly dirty. Then at the end, it just lost its meaning, it seemed almost like a very beautiful erotica story then it’s just like “bam, no orgasm and that’s it”
Just felt kinda cheap. But other than that…it was really good. It might have been better if you had refered to some of the bodily organs by less frank names sometimes, but…whatever.
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