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Poetry / Alone

you and your
two way mirror attitude.
you can see out
but no one else can see in.
you better break it
before it
breaks
you.

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oknapp avatar General Stranger

June 03, 2009

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Very interesting and it manages to say alot about the person in just a few words. But i feel that you could expound on this a bit and let the readers know a little more. This is like a prolouge with more to come. i like what you said about the mirror. I heard it shatter. Sandi

linzeroni avatar General Stranger

November 03, 2005

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linzeroni reviewed Version 1 - Read 100%% of the Item

Short but sweet, I like it.

chrisbaxter01 avatar General Stranger

November 03, 2005

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chrisbaxter01 reviewed Version 1 - Read 100%% of the Item

I love the momentum of the poem, it makes you think. Nice work.

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