Poetry / Two Girls

i met two girls
on the corner
of peachtree
and 17th street
in Atlanta
the sweaty armpit
of Moloch
we were all waiting
for the same thing
they came from
St Augustine and I
came from Starland
to see the band
they were only
sixteen and
living seemed
so easy for them
we became close friends
and I haven’t seen
either of them
since…

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February 08, 2008

tasteyourVANITYx

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tasteyourVANITYx reviewed Version 1 - Read 100% of the Item

Wow. this was kind of weird.
but kind of good at the same time.
i love how it felt like it was leading up to something,
but just ended without notice.

good work.
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