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Poetry / PLAYED TO PERFECTION
So what’s the attraction?
Am I just a distraction?
Am I only a means for release?
Am I just a delusion
to relieve your confusion
and bring you some semblance of peace?
Is your passion’s bright fire
only fueled by desire?
Does some of it come from the heart?
Are you scared to reveal
what you really feel
and so you keep hiding that part?
When the moment is tender
at the time of surrender
is there even a hint of affection?
Or is all of it lies?
Just a brilliant disguise
and a game you have played to perfection?
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Flows well and for as much rhyming as you used, I’m guesing you were sticking to a particular meter, it comes off pretty well without sounding cheezy. Also, it’s good that the subject matter, while obviously interpersonal relationships are a thouroughly done topic, comes across without to much of a hint of cleshae(sp?).
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May 08, 2006
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Really good, I know you might have heard this before. Not many can ask for so much in detail. So good job, well done
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