Poetry / Chi hohchifo nanta? - What is your name?

Chi hohchifo nanta? – What is your name?

I have seen you before in a dream.
Chi hohchifo nanta?
I have met you before in another life hundreds of years ago.
Chi hohchifo nanta?

You watch me as if you want to ask me my name.
It is something that we can’t explain.
Something that no one would understand.
You turn and say the same thing you said all those years ago.
I will miss you until I find you again.

There are some days I stop and wonder where you are.
You are my only love.
I hated you when you left me.
I cried, I still cry when I think of you.
I still miss you.
You are the only one that I wish for.

You are my mali.

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April 29, 2008

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I liked the mysterious aspect to this piece. The narrative flow is well written which is another aspect that i liked. There is also a dream like quality to the poem which further adds to the mystery. good work.

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