Poetry / Liquid Opiate
liquid opiate, crimson, still
encased in a globe, transparent
in my hand
at my lips
flooding my mouth
gliding down
explosion of warmth within
the sensation I have
because of you
Love, me
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Erm, I don’t think this is all too fancy a poem…sorry :P
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