Poetry / A Folded Soul
Have you ever felt your soul being folded into Oragami, then set alight?
And watched it wilt and glow?
Even temporary folds leave creases that last a lifetime.
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handsomedave reviewed Version 1 -
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It is quite a vivid visual. But it is too mundane really. It leaves me wanting more. Some more of an explanation of this extreme case of being completely folded, crushed and then burned to everlasting scars from the lightest of bruises.
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Hope reviewed Version 1 -
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Very profound thought. I like the visual. Would like to see more.
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