Poetry / I-16

i’d rather sit back right now
and not believe it’s true
i’d rather keep going in my life
and continue loving you

it would be so much easier
to believe it is all a lie
it would be all too easy
to never say goodbye

i think i could blame myself
for you being there that day
i think i could take the blame
for me sending you away

maybe i should’ve let you stay
maybe i could have protected you
maybe he wouldn’t have touched you
maybe i would’ve said i love you
maybe you wouldn’t have been on the road
maybe that truck would’ve stopped
maybe you’d still be here today
but maybe, you would not

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March 07, 2006

JamesDominic

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JamesDominic reviewed Version 1 - Read 100%% of the Item

i like this poem, but then again i like anything thats relatively dark.  i like the repetition of certain phrases for emphasis, but it still feels a little vague to me.  whats it about? some kind of loss.  i just wonder what happened. car accident is my best guess.

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