Poetry / It's Raining Words (Analysis)

I’ve been doused with words that won’t stain
Yet the downpour colors my day
Like a wild child dancing in rain
My own laughter splashes away

The drought which held captive a muse
When musing took capture of me
And just so I should not confuse
Art with love or pain, let there be

A deluge, a torrent of thought
Raging floods arrived with a smile.
Hard currency words won and bought,
Lures the muse back home for awhile.
 

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November 10, 2009

Nosferatu_Networker

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33	M	Elkin, NC	November 18

Nosferatu_Networker reviewed Version 1 - Read 100% of the Item

it sounded interesting,but i didnt understand it

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November 10, 2009

by Bibelotredux

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51	F	Ogdensburg, NY	November 21

I had a dry spell in my writing.  The muse almost dropped dead.  But then I was innundated with words- raining down on me like a flash flood from a broken sky.  The words made me laugh, and I began to write again.  

Bibelot

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November 07, 2009

hpudding1

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hpudding1 reviewed Version 1 - Read 100% of the Item

Wow, I give this a 9.999. I think its wonderful. My one critique is that you could maybe switch the tense, and describe more of your feelings. Other than that I thinks its great!

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November 07, 2009

by Bibelotredux

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51	F	Ogdensburg, NY	November 21

Thank you for the good review, hpudding1.

Bibelot

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November 06, 2009

Trumparrot

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13	F	Greenville, WI	November 20

Trumparrot reviewed Version 1 - Read 100% of the Item

Art with love or pain, let there be.

Great job, it was really good!

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November 06, 2009

by Bibelotredux

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51	F	Ogdensburg, NY	November 21

Thank you for reading and enjoying, Trumparrot.

Bibelot

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