Poetry / You said... (Analysis)
You said that they said
That some said they may've said
That one said that we said
That he said that she said
You like me
He really likes me
Now there's one thing to do
And it's go and ask you
Do you really like me?
So You said that they said
That some said they may've said
That one said that we said
That he said that she said
That I like you.
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The poem seems more like a letter then a poem.
I find it interesting how u used the same word and it flowed pretty well. It had a good rhythm.Overall it was good.
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uhhh ha that’s very interesting.Well written and no errors good job:)
I think this poem is adorable and simple. But not simple in a bad way. It’s simplicity is what makes it appealing. It seems so light and innocent. I especially like the first and last verse. I think the middle one needs a bit of work to match the other two in cleverness.
This is a very interesting piece. I have never seen a poem written as such. You actually captured my attention and you grabed be and kept me there. I like your style. It’s a really deep meaning I like it
nice devices. dig it.
my only questions are the 1st and 2nd lines in the middle stanza.
1st line should be the last line in the top, no?
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