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Poetry / Open or Closed

Open or Closed 4 November 2009 by Steven Hoheneder

OPEN

The door has always been open

Letting in the secrets and wonder of today

Where’s the door stop? It’s nowhere around

Nothing and no one bound to come through

CLOSED

The door closes shutting out the experiences

I still yet to have

Walls built to protect myself

From disappointment and heartache

Will the door ever open?

OPEN

The door creaks open

Letting a little at a time

A new love, a new rhyme

Treading through the murky waters of lies

Built to protect

A will to defect from the past

To get on with my life and move forward

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November 05, 2009

Trumparrot

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Trumparrot reviewed Version 1 - Read 100% of the Item

It’s really cool how you wrote it. I think it’s more of a poem, but if you tweaked it a bit it could be a song. I like it better as a poem, though. Good job!

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November 06, 2009

by Kidatheartwriter

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Yeah, I see what you mean. A few words taken out and it can be a song. What do you think it’s about? Not that I asked that in the requests.

November 06, 2009

by Trumparrot

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I think it’s like the door opens your mind to your imagination, and you’re feeling inspired, and it’s overwhelming you and you want it to stop, but you just want to move on.

November 09, 2009