Poetry / Smiles And Tears
Life is based on principles and emotions allowed to share.
Going through life with laughs and cries a mask with double stares.
One lives life with a smile but it only conceals the tears.
Pain that is obtained by problems that reveal the hidden fears.
Surpassing all the obstacles from happy to sad.
Feeling like crying deep inside but descising it with a laugh.
Walking around in a illusion without any worries and pain.
But to be surprised by it's intensity of the smiles that are held in vain.
Retrieving from deep inside the truth of how one feels.
Fighting back the retributionand revealing emotions that are real.
Laughing and smiling on the outside but deep inside escapes a cry.
Working on the problems that are aroused by the mental mind.
Smiling, playing, and laughing only to provoke the hidden rains.
Smiles contain happiness and sadness contains the stains.
Feeling are an evolution, emotions that are far or near.
That life is a double mask full of countless "Smiles and Tears"
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I read this and was shocked by how hard it hit home with me…
“Laughing and smiling on the outside but deep inside escapes a cry.” This line personally hit me… I like the whole poem but that line was the strongest to me. I’m also making this one of my favorites just because it speaks nothing less than the truth and would most likely help alot of people of they read this.
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I don’t know who you are. But I believe in this. So far in MY life I haven’t heard a
single word better than this.
There is no color, there is no race, there is no disabled, there are no sick, there are
no assholes or fuck ups or rednecks. But there are.
If there was a weapon that destroyed fear I think we’d all see life a little different.
I hope you understand that I wish to make this a “favorite” as they say, of MINE,
because It’s fucking perfect.
D.
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